Sorry for that odd article I've posted up without explanation. Basically, I've been writing a column for this webzine, but I seem to have hit a brick wall and can't proceed beyond this bland structure, with appallingly bland sentences. So I thought it might be a good idea for me to open the floor and ask for people to comment on it (critically, if you have time), and I'm posting up my most recent article here and opening it to comments.
I'd appreciate it if any one would care to take the time to read it and tell me what can be improved on, and how I could go about doing it. Anything would do - you can do it on anon if you want to, or you can just tell me what you think about it if you don't know how to comment critically on it.
Everything not said in malice would be appreciated :) and I'll internet-hug you if I can't do it in real life!
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